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angeleyes
03-07-2003, 05:47 PM
I made this in Adobe Illustrator...wanted some opinions on it. I'm trying to come up with something creative to submit to an "Illustrator Newbie" contest and the deadline is Sunday

_ED
03-07-2003, 06:15 PM
pretty good if you are indeed a newbie and not just pretending to be a newbie. Its a bit sloppy but has some artistic merit.

Try removing the extra white peices from the picture if you can pull it off neatly. One other thing you could try is to just make the entire background, white. So the extras don't show.

Funbrunette
03-07-2003, 08:49 PM
Wow! Looks great! :xthumbs:

_ED
03-07-2003, 09:25 PM
oh i see.
you saved it with a transparent BG.
looks better like this

angeleyes
03-08-2003, 12:10 PM
Good Morning and thanks Ed. After I posted it, I knew I screwed something up. How did you change it? I have the same thing in color but I made it b&w to cover some of the flaws I made working with the gradient tool. Oh, and yes--I am a "newbie".... I cheated around a few corners--like the face. I imported a photo into AI--Locked it and traced over it with the pen tool. Do you know of any good sites with easy to read tutorials?

Panky
03-08-2003, 01:41 PM
Kewl! <img src="http://smilies.sofrayt.com/%5E/9/biggthum.gif" width="33" height="15"> Keep it up! Practice makes perfect. <img src="http://smilies.sofrayt.com/%5E/8/greenwinky.gif" width="15" height="15">


Some tutorials:
http://www.adobe.com/products/tips/illustrator.html
http://www.tutorialhunt.com/
http://www.nelsonsfreelance.com/tutorial/index.html
http://www.tiemdesign.com/HOWTO/Illustrator.htm
http://graphicssoft.about.com/cs/illustratortuts/

<img src="http://smilies.sofrayt.com/%5E/r/biggrininvert.gif" width="15" height="15">
Panky

firehorse
03-08-2003, 02:39 PM
Congrats that is a great begining! :D