Need your input on tour !

[webmistress]

Okay people..... made my first real tour... what do you think ?

here it is (http://www.fuck-erotica.net/index.html)

Be gentle...it's my first one :D

[jovigirl]

Looks cool girl :-)

Just some little angles extracting the pics
How did you do it?

[webmistress]

Originally posted by jovigirl
Looks cool girl :-)

Just some little angles extracting the pics
How did you do it?


Emmhhhh Thanks.... and what ???? "Just some little angles extracting the pics"


Please forgive me..I'm blond :confused:

[jovigirl]

Originally posted by webmistress
Emmhhhh Thanks.... and what ???? "Just some little angles extracting the pics"


Please forgive me..I'm blond :confused:

Meaning corners sorry
sometimes my english sucks
look at the back of the guy here
http://www.fuck-erotica.net/tour2.html

[Ronaldo]

Spellcheck-

http://www.fuck-erotica.net/tour2.html

souese should be source
mouthfulls should be mouthfuls

http://www.fuck-erotica.net/tour4.html

puzzels should be puzzles


I also think the images could be a little sharper.

All in all though it looks pretty good.