new series of galleries

[lucas131]

http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/013/index.html
http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/014/index.html
http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/015/index.html
http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/016/index.html
http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/017/index.html

My new gallerie. Any attentions, errors, rate?

[thruma]

Hey Lucas

Just a few things.

The first link to your sponsor on each page doesn't work. You need to double check this before you submit to any TGPs.

Why?
for one thing some TGPs may just refuse the gallery for that.

Two.
You won't be sending the surfers to your sponsor when they click those links so you won't make any money even if some tgps do accept the galleries.

Three
You can't fix it once it's submitted or you risk being blacklisted.


About the text.

"It was such a turn on to see his limp cock pull out of her wet hole!"

Most strait guys would be more focused on the female part of the anatomy rather than the guys limp cock.

Secondly
It seems you're trying to appeal to a voyeuristic crowd with the text but it's not a voyeur gallery.

I know the guys surfing are sort of voyeurs but you're trying to sell a fantasy not a voyeur experience.

I would try something like this for text.

"I felt my cock being squeezed by her pink pussy and I shot my load into her"

Not my best text but you get the idea.

[lucas131]

Thx i improved my mistake now links go to sponsor :)
In what gallery text doesn't fit?

[monaro]

15 and 16 to myself look better with the color than the others

[thruma]

Originally posted by lucas131

In what gallery text doesn't fit?

this one here

http://www.nudistteenspics.com/gallery/017/index.html

IMHO

[blazi]

I think the galleries look great myself!

[chilihost]

they look really good!

cheers,
Luke

[thruma]

yeah I as far as looks they're good.
And now that the first link is fixed in them they're pretty good

Just the text in that one seemed could have been better.