Jerkin'Around
 

Unfortunally my capital isn't high enough to start my own contant yet, and I dont want to buy any contant or make free sites, but the capital is comming in slowlly. So I figured I'd make 'templates' to practice in Photoshop, so when I do infact get the capital & start filming I will know eaxclly how to operate with Photoshop so my site would look appealing

I took images from: http://www2.xfreehosting.com/amateur...070521-hun.htm

& text from: Bangbus.com
Other then that, I designed it all by myself, the title, the colors, etc.

What do you guys think?

http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.ph...vie_adult1.jpg

Edit: The site is in the brown-ish border, not the whole thing.

well the design is very honestly standard - so you've captured that. try and not look at what someone else does and use your own creativity. some of the best tgp's and sites come from people that step outside the comfort zone and try something new and wild.

the second design is good, though I would attempt to make the white drippings more rounded like raindrops to simulate cum if your trying for that. pictures are great. I have always said that the content is what sells the site.. the sizzle in it. a good designer knows exactly what picture captures the eyes attention and makes you want to see more. the rest just pic anything that has tits in it LOL