toon feedback...
 

Did the following toon on spec this week but the guy is MIA now...

Was wanting to get feedback/critique on it if anyone cares to offer
their opinions... His eyes need some work I know... lol... ;)

(toon was for bukkake site btw...)
http://intersmart.com/netpond/nastyl...kake-color.gif

your boobs are not that big and I do not have a gotee....

but yes, the eyes are kinda weird.

lol, that's great I think the bukkake shot needs some work, I had to look closely to notice it was there.

Torn,

You are just pissed I ain't posted a pic of my cock here yet... lol


Sweet7,

Thank you for comments, will play with the opacity settings some and see if can make the 'jizz' stand out more

great toon - reminds me of back in highschool when I would draw the girls sitting around me in provocative manners with the band members of KISS

No XXXPhoto, I am pissed you haven’t held me since last Jan. speaking of which, where were you in August?

Legacy,

What a coincidence! When I was in High School I'd try to draw the band girls to me and get them to KISS my member provocatively... talk about a small world... lol


Torn,

Statewide golf tourney that week and family reunion on the weekend of the Aug show... :^(

I love the toon XXXPhoto... but shouldn't the girl be the center of attention?

Chris,

In this instance no; was for Mr. Bukkake site... hence the portly fellow poppin his load on the lass...

Good thing about vectors though is if this sale doesn't pan out I can tweak it so he's fucking her and have her pooter showing... I think that would bring her more in focus