My sweetie
Fear of winning is the only thing that prevents me from entering this contest! Thank you so much for posting the winning "sentence."
I used to enter the "Three Day Novel Contest," that came out of Canada in years past. (Write a novel, start to finish, in three days.) My first entry was when they still were able to handwrite comments on them. I got a "very well written...but..." *sigh* My characters were not believable because they were "too nice."