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			01-03-2004, 12:12 AM
			
							
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				Review my new TGP site, help.
			 
			 
			
		
		
		
		Hi,  
I started this new tgp site  http://www.barfuck.com
I need comments on the layout, design, etc.
 
I want to buy some traffic, but before I invest in that I need to know what you all think, and what needs to be changed.
 
Thanks so much for your time. 
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			01-03-2004, 03:40 AM
			
							
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		well, I looked at the 3 cocktail glasses and the lady, very 50's, so I was hoping for the whole site to have that "50's" look, but no, nothing, In fact, once you forget the header with the lady, all there is is a bunch of links. 
 
 
 
btw, jokes ? 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			01-03-2004, 04:27 AM
			
							
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		 Welcum to XNations tuka!    
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 I personally prefer to have the movie links seperate from the pic links, or at least better defined. Probably no biggie. Could be just me.  
 
The layout is easy to read and navigate.  
 
I wouldn't put the jokes there. The main objective for people to submit galleries, is so that their link will be seen and clicked on.  The jokes are - Taking up space that could be used for sponsors
 
 
Drawing attention away from listed links (Even though there are image links next to the text links, it's still a different mindset to the surfer. They want to see naked people and erotic imagery. It keeps them horny. Having the text link jokes there, means more that a surfer has to read or at least breaks the whole mental image thing. If you are going to place text links there, have erotic text that links to sponsors, or text written to keep the surfer horny. ) 
 
Using space that could possibly be used for purchased ad spots 
  
The logo really doesn't say "party", "cum screw this hot chick", "nightclub", ...    It looks like something innocent like "June Cleaver".   When you read the name "bar fuck", you develop this image in your head of some chick getting nailed on top of a bar, or some hot gorgeous bar fly sitting there flirting with the clientele.  Some naked chick laying on top of the bar and people pour drinks on her and lick them off...    Even if it's a cartoon, or Anime, or an image of an attractive woman holding a wine glass, seducing your surfers, it would imply more towards "bar fuck" than the innocent look the header implies now. 
 
  
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			01-03-2004, 04:34 AM
			
							
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		Seemed very similar to most other TGPs and that is the problem. Why should I bookmark it? 
 
But at least I went to the sites I clicked on and you did not send me to another TGP. 
 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
	
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			01-03-2004, 07:08 AM
			
							
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		Nadia !!! 
How are ya sweetie ?!?
 
I love the 50's retro look ... maybe you can put my  Rectal Rooter Gallery on it ??? HAHAHAHAHA
 
I agree ... lose the jokes  ... but the general layout is working for me ... you also need a toplist or friends list near the top of it (will help with traffic trades)    
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
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